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#1 Inuyasha

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Posted 17 August 2004 - 09:03 AM

*kahisss, ramp slowly lowers, light blinding him*
*SMASH, the butt of the compresion rifle smashing into his stomache, doubling over and weeping in pain*
*a deep voice says*Get ure panzy ass up Phenix, today is the day you die horibly.
*continues to cry on the ground not wanting to die, teh boot flieing and nailing him in the chest makin him flip over and yelp in pain*
*deep voice again*GET UP!
*he gets up and is nailed in the stomache with the butt of the rifle again and almost doubles over*
*the Compresion rifle pressed against his back, he is given the order to move, and he begins moving forward*
*he notices on the sides of him the crowds are glaring at him and others look like they could kill him right there, he begins to weep his sissy weep*
*deep voice*Stop your crying you panzy
*they enter a room, Phenix still not sure whats going on, totaly shocked at whats happening to him*
*it looks like a modified courtroom with a large desk instead of a judge stand, and the leaders of DoD are sitting behind it, faces devote of any look, there is no jurry, just the leaders, the court is packed with ppl who want to see how Phenix will die*
*DaRkGoDx begins to talk*Phenix, the leaders of DoD and fellow members have come to a decision of how ure death will come. You will be slowly dipped into a vat of slow burnin acid until you are no more. U will be in great pain, and we will keep you alive as long as we can.
*phenix begins to cry and falls to his knees, weeping, asking for forgivness*
*DaRkGoDx speaks*Now get this scum out of my courtroom and proceed right to the acid chamber.
*Phenix is again ordered to move with the compresion rifle against his back, he begins moving and a person in the crowd spits on him and begins yelling, the whole crowd begins doing so.
*Phenix is crying so hard he makes a baby look weak*
*They step into the acid chamber and Phenix notices a crane hangin from the roof*
*He is forced onto a platform and is hooked onto the crane*
*the crane slowly raises and heads for the middle of the vat*
*the crane hangs there for what seems like to Phenix forever as his tears fall into the acid making hiss noises*
*the crane begins moving slowly down, his feet enter the vat, his boots begin to melt away, he can already feel the acid gettin to him*
*the crane slows down to a slow decent and Phenix begins to roast*
*he begins screaming, the pain excrucaiting*
*hes in up to his knees now, and hes thrashing and screaming as his skin melts from his bones*



Il leave the rest to your imaginations :P


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<span style=\'color:red\'>Death... Destruction...</span><span style=\'color:black\'> The DaRkNeSs has come.</span>
<span style=\'color:black\'>When death comes, it comes quickly, or it comes slowly, either way, if your in my sights, deaths coming.</span>


#2 RJay45

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Posted 17 August 2004 - 02:00 PM

Hey you dumbass, the competition ended. Though we might send you guys a copy of the first rpg-x gdk/sdk so you can 'remove all the crap' or add your personal touches with your groups facination with the gay culture or something. :P

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#3 TiM

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Posted 17 August 2004 - 02:15 PM

Lol, but you can still post stories if you wish, Jay. Not that this one would win or anything... :P

Hmm, overall, not a good story. Bad plot. Bad grammar. Bad Spelling. And where did you learn English? That's no story writing convention I've ever seen. :P

Seriously though. Was there any point to that? All you've done is waste several bytes of forum space. :P

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#4 Sniper

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Posted 17 August 2004 - 02:24 PM

Rofl Rofl Rofl, how do you mean, Fiction :P:P

#5 TiM

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Posted 17 August 2004 - 02:44 PM

Huh? Where was fiction mentioned? :P

#6 Nazar

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Posted 17 August 2004 - 04:34 PM

Omg leik teh storey is leik totelly kewl to teh maxx!
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#7 Dom

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Posted 17 August 2004 - 10:02 PM

I found that fun to read, just mentaly swaping DarkGodX for Phenix and visa verusa ;)
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#8 Sniper

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Posted 18 August 2004 - 11:52 AM

Sniff, well, the title of this Sub-Forum is Fan Fiction rofl, and FICTION it sure was, Sniff, I just can't stop crying of pleasure rofl...

#9 TiM

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Posted 18 August 2004 - 12:27 PM

Hahaha. :lol:


Fair enough. ;)

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#10 Abyss

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Posted 18 January 2007 - 07:26 PM

strange...i must do further study on this alien culture...


oh wait...it was a story?? :blink::blink::blink::)




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