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#1 Grizz

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 07:41 PM

The USS Poseidon under the command of CO Daniel with its sponsor on board Vice Admiral Janeway (myself)

It began with the ship at space dock. Systems were failing on all decks and secondary systems were mostly off line, with primary systems to go next. Due to some technical failures we were unable to get onto the space dock, just docked with it. When Life support systems started failing, decks 3 and below were sealed off. Only the engineer on board was able to go to engineering, in a hazard suit of course. But Then, disaster struck. Due to hull weaknesses, the areas where the docking clamps were attatched, the hull ripped from the ship, causing the ship to ship violently and atmosphere was lost in certain areas. Once containment fields were in place, we found ourselves adrift, and whats worse, we were heading for a region, of empty space. (r_gamma 0 kthx) Alone and afraid we were losing life support. We had over an hour to get to safety, before we suffocate, and freeze. The Engineer on board noticed an unmanned shuttle, adrift near the space dock, which was quickly moving away from us. He risked him life by donning an EVA suit and ejecting himself into space to reach the shuttle. Silence, we heard nothing. but time was running out. In the remaining crews last attempt they diverted what power they could to a remaining shuttle. As Janeway lost consciousness due to oxygen degrevation Captain daniel blasted the shuttle bay doors and the shuttle was thrown into space. Long range sensors detected a federation scout ship on the edge of this 'void' but the captain must head to the space dock to recover his only engineer remaining. With a power drain on the shuttle and the captain the heading the same way as janeway, it was a miracle what happend next.

The lone engineer, who risked his life, recovered a type 21 shuttle and beamed us abourd. As we headed to the federation scout ship, beeps and blips started appearing as data from planets and stars were finally seen again.

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#2 Lee

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 11:15 PM

How could an unexplored region of space be right next to a drydock? :D
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#3 Robertson

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Posted 10 November 2007 - 11:33 PM

where does it say the region was unexplored?

where does it say its a federation drydock? it could be alien
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#4 Scooter

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Posted 11 November 2007 - 01:24 AM

It began with the ship at space dock.


The context of that sentence indicates that it's a Federation space dock.

Systems were failing on all decks and secondary systems were mostly off line, with primary systems to go next.


That's got to be a first. Usually primary systems go first.
"Captain, this piece of equipment we're not using is failing."
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Due to some technical failures we were unable to get onto the space dock, just docked with it. When Life support systems started failing, decks 3 and below were sealed off.


If you're docked, you're running in External Support mode. Nothing to worry about. All engineers can be focussed on fixing life support. Security can focus on forcing the docking ports opening. If worse comes to worse, beam to the station using the transporters in the shuttles, or eject in the escape pods and wait for the station staff to tractor you in.

Only the engineer on board was able to go to engineering, in a hazard suit of course.


Of course, because hazard suits are, like, real and everything.
*puts on low-pressure environment garment*

But Then, disaster struck. Due to hull weaknesses, the areas where the docking clamps were attatched, the hull ripped from the ship, causing the ship to ship violently and atmosphere was lost in certain areas. Once containment fields were in place, we found ourselves adrift, and whats worse, we were heading for a region, of empty space.


The space dock people didn't think to use their tractor beams? I'm also curious to know where this momentum came from considering the ship was at rest. *high-fives a holographic Issac Newton*

Alone and afraid we were losing life support. We had over an hour to get to safety, before we suffocate, and freeze. The Engineer on board noticed an unmanned shuttle, adrift near the space dock, which was quickly moving away from us. He risked him life by donning an EVA suit and ejecting himself into space to reach the shuttle.


Meanwhile, no one seemed to notice the infinite supply of shuttles they already carried in the shuttlebay.

Silence, we heard nothing. but time was running out. In the remaining crews last attempt they diverted what power they could to a remaining shuttle. As Janeway lost consciousness due to oxygen degrevation Captain daniel blasted the shuttle bay doors and the shuttle was thrown into space.


Wasn't the shuttle already in space? And why hasn't the order to evacuate been given yet?

Long range sensors detected a federation scout ship on the edge of this 'void' but the captain must head to the space dock to recover his only engineer remaining. With a power drain on the shuttle and the captain the heading the same way as janeway, it was a miracle what happend next.

The lone engineer, who risked his life, recovered a type 21 shuttle and beamed us abourd. As we headed to the federation scout ship, beeps and blips started appearing as data from planets and stars were finally seen again.


So there was no void in the first place? How do beeps and blips appear? How do 150 people fit inside a shuttlecraft?

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#5 Smyth Wesson

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Posted 11 November 2007 - 01:43 AM

150 people can fit in a shuttlecraft if the Delta Flyer and Neelix's Ship can fit in Voyager's shuttle maintenance area (I'm sure they could have fit that Maquis ship in there somehow)
I personally have theorized that the TARDIS was stolen by Section 31 and integrated into the back of Voyager. This is where the 300 security crewmembers/redshirts who die also come from. Another mystery solved, thanks to Smyth Wesson.
But no, 143 people got left behind and froze, starved, suffocated or ate each other. What a happy ending.
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Posted 11 November 2007 - 06:59 AM

I must say that is an interesting story.
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#7 Smyth Wesson

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Posted 11 November 2007 - 07:09 AM

A thought: What the frell happened to "The Void 1"?
Did it fall into Voyager's shuttlebay?
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#8 Grizz

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Posted 11 November 2007 - 08:26 AM

The Void 1 was Voyagers episode The Void, i called it 2 to not confuse peple or so i thought and as to the 150 in a shuttle craft, there wasnt. Most of the crew was on the space dock even though i forgot to mention that. But one engineer on board was a clue i guese :D




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